Mahdi Ahmed

Scripting waves of imagination from the sunny side of the Maldives.

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rewriting VAFAATHERI KEHIVERIYAA begins…

It’s customary that I keep myself away from any written screenplay for a while before I begin rewriting them. Gives me a better perspective to what I had written earlier. VAFAATHERI KEHIVERIYAA was no exception. I have started rewriting it yesterday.
 
I have completely changed the drama dynamics of one particular scene so that SEEZAN can have fluid camera movements around his subjects. Previously the drama was created inside a parked car. He could have had his camera movements anyway, so I thought.
 
I have already structured four bridging scenes to the climax. And the climax itself needs to be rewritten. I have written shorthand of all that needs to be written.
 
In a day or two I am going to finish off this project. However, the rewritten screenplay will be submitted only after the weekend. During the weekend, I am hoping to go through the final screenplay one more time.
 
Will keep updated once I am done.
 
Cheers
 
 

status update for INGILI…

Hopefully today, if not surely tomorrow, one of the co-producer slash actor of INGILI will fly down to his island of birth to build the set required for the production of INGILI. We, the production team were unsuccessful at finding a right location director, RAVI has visualized. Since we were skidding behind schedule, location hunting was halted and turned to plan B. We have decided to build the required set that was designed giving careful attention to camera movements. More than anything else, RAVI wants fluidity in his storytelling.

After helming a short film for ETERNAL PICTURES last week, on Monday, RAVI will sit down with his long time cinematographer to start work on INGILI storyboards. He has confirmed 5 days to wrap storyboarding.

We have also confirmed a talent to compose the music for INGILI. All the names including cast will be revealed officially a day before the production starts.

INGILI is being fast tracked for a mid-April shooting and an early June release.

rewriting VAFAATHERI KEHIVERIYAA…

SEEZAN has spoken. He has given his comments after reading the draft of VAFAATHERI KEHIVERIYAA. Below is a brief summary of the long conversation I had with him on Friday afternoon.

First and foremost, he wanted the climax to be corny, the way I see it, that’s the only way the climax would turn up if his changes are incorporated. Unsurprisingly, like the trend of many local directors and producers these days, he wants the audience to cry an ocean. What, from a film that was written with a noir genre in mind! Anyway, he gave me his version of the climax or what he imagined, at which I was not able to digest even a little bit. I felt that not only his climax would make the characters and their inner selves unbelievable but the whole concept would turn unrealistic. Last but not least, he wanted more melodrama at situations where drama or melodrama was not required.

After much thought, I came up with a possible way to make the climax closer to what SEEZAN imagined but less what he imagined. However, to achieve this, I need to write few extra scenes that would lead up to a climax that would satisfy SEEZAN. Well, in this afternoon’s conversation with him, I explained to him of the new climax. Luckily, he was convinced. Phew!

It took more than thirty minutes to make him understand my point of view. For some odd reason, by then I was mentally tired, but I managed to ask him about other changes he wanted. He had a total of five additional changes, all of them to which I only agreed when he justified his reasons. That was when I switched  myself to listening mode meanwhile making shorthand notes of what he was trying to explain. After he was done, we hung up. I must say that even though I disagreed to most of what he said, at the end of the day, it’s his baby I am writing and I am fully obliged to write and rewrite to his standards.

I will begin rewriting in a days time, and hopefully within three days I can submit a screenplay that SEEZAN approves of.

What the hell have I done lately?

My last post was on November last year. Now it’s 2009, and a month has already passed from this year. Often I have asked myself, what the hell have I done lately? Now after 2 months and few days later, I am going to answer that question to the best of my ability.

To be honest, I haven’t done much. However, last year marked a good year for me in writing. Unfortunately none were produced. Most of my screenplays were shelved due to budget constraints. Only 00:00 was green lit. Even that has fallen in to a getting-delayed curse. But good news is that 00:00 will start principal photography in mid March, that’s next month. That’s something to get excited about.

I must confess that I felt tired after writing so much last year. So obviously I needed a break to reboot my brain cells. That I did on December. I took a holiday with my wife to amazing Cambodia. We stayed in Phnom Penh where everything’s cheap and the traffic is a jam. We also visited the wondrous Angkor Wat in Siem Reap. Usually I am a wet blanket myself when it comes to sight seeing, but Angkor Wat took my breath away. Thanks to my wife for dragging me there and in the end we ended up having the time of our lives. Actually this trip to Cambodia was like killing two birds with one stone. First it was a much needed holiday for us. Secondly to celebrate our fourth wedding anniversary. We married on 16th December 2004. We also declared this our second honeymoon since our first honeymoon ended in tragedy in Phuket on 26th December 2004. That was the day the tsunami hit. We made a narrow escape, luckily.

After returning from Cambodia, immediately I started working on a concept Seezan discussed earlier last year. I even started writing to some extent and then for some odd reason or two stopped. Now I have resumed writing on this suspense thriller with a love triangle that unveils in NuwaraEliya, Sri Lanka where the two from three play each other with tragic consequences. The working title of this one is called KEHI meaning TRICK. At first I had scheduled to wrap up writing in January. But due to unforeseen circumstances such as getting busy at office and many more, I was unable to finish. So cometh February and I am hoping to hand over the first draft to Seezan by the end of this month.

In the midst of writing KEHI, I did something I haven’t done before. Halted writing it and finished another one. Sometimes these norms are meant to be broken. This another one was not only a quickie but a shorty for Ted, the finest Dhivehi film maker on my map. It was a short film screenplay of 10-15 minutes which Ted is going to make for an NGO with an anti-drug agenda.

I have delivered that screenplay titled HIYANI, translated REFLECTION. It’s about a drug addict girl who on her final minutes of fragile life reflects on her past. The screenplay shows how sinister forces in society turns innocent people in to addicts. Then again, its up to each and every individual to decide the path that individual wants to walk.

Ted’s contract has 2 short films. The first one’s written. And the second one is also to be written by me. But Ted is suppose to construct the structure of that screenplay. I am eagerly awaiting for him to finish his part which I am sure he will do in no time. It’s always a pleasure to be part of his team.

Coming back to Seezan’s screenplay, so far I have written the first 30 minutes of it. But I need to fast track my work on this one, even though the structure has been made. This year I have resolved to write more than I have written last year. So God help me achieve this goal.

an UNTITLED project…

I am going to delay writing 40 and start on an untitled project which I have developed for actor/ director/ producer SEEZAN last year. To be honest, I was not expecting this project to rekindle anytime soon.  
 
I have long written a treatment for this project which was a concept originally developed by SEEZAN himself. The project was then shelved from there until a day ago SEEZAN called me up. He wanted to fast track this project as the first production from his studio, C-XANAL MOVIES next year. 
 
One thing led to another in shelving this project.  First, the producer who first met me with SEEZAN got split.  So I was unable to verify whose project it was. Since it was a concept of SEEZAN, I decided that he would be the sole owner of the screenplay once it was written. Then SEEZAN got busy shooting KHALAAS in Sri Lanka. Few months later after KHALAAS was released and withdrawn from the cinema after three shows, SEEZAN dived head first in to the recently ended presidential election campaigning. Now that it’s over weeks ago, I am thinking that SEEZAN is able to fill his chest with some fresh air and set his focus on films again. However, I thought he would produce the political film which he announced simultaneously with KHALAAS. But it was not meant to be. Maybe he’d enough of politics and needs a diversion.
 
SEEZAN wants this untitled project to be written for end of January 2009. Since a treatment has been written and part of the structure has been development to some extent, it won’t be long before I start writing the screenplay. In short, this project is a suspense thriller set inside a romatic love triangle. The whole story will take place in Nuwara Eliya, Sri Lanka. 
 
More news on the concept once I fully develop the stucture. Until then, I am off to my notepad.

40 on my mind…

When I am done rewriting RAANIYA, I might start working on ’40’ which is a drama set in a sleepy suburb of Male’ with very shady characters. Once again ’40’ relies heavily on a twist but of another kind. What’s with these twists these days? I haven’t a clue why I am so overly obsessed with twisting my screenplays with twists after twists.

But twisting goes back a long way. I was first fascinated with twists when I saw USUAL SUSPECTS. Then there was FIGHT CLUB. But twists twisted my mind with SIXTH SENSE. Then OTHERS forever twisted my fate.

I did a little bit of experimenting when I wrote VAAREY for then Ministry of Atolls Administration teledrama in 2000. It had this dramatic twist which kind of work at some levels. I was able to hide the truth from the audience and worked my way towards the twist at the end. When I wrote VAAREY, I was influenced by the SIXTH SENSE, which was released the previous year. VAAREY was an excellent experience that started the tale of my twisting. Since I am talking too much about twisting, Elvis is trying to contact me from his grave. He wants to know if I have turns with my twists.

Months back, I have developed the whole structure of ’40’ with my co-writer AHMED ZAREER. Visual director SHAREE was attached to direct. But just as writing was about to begin, there was a twist. SHAREE insisted on halting the project. He found ’00:00′ more tantalising. However, once writing ’00:00′ was completed, there were more twists. SHAREE’s schedule changed, the production was delayed for months, and then the producer left the project due to all these delays. In the end ’00:00′ was acquired by DV PRODUCTIONS. And to date, that project is still facing more delays. First, the production was delayed when shooting fell into the month of Ramadan, and now the political tension in the country has suspended the project indefinitely.

Coming back to ’40’, I have already negotiated this project with a studio. And now it’s almost a done deal. The studio is scheduling to begin shooting during the first quarter of 2009, and they will do all they can to get hold of SHAREE to direct.

rewriting RAANIYA…

I have started rewriting RAANIYA a day ago even though I am yet to receive any rewritable feedbacks from FATTHAAH. He is set to direct RAANIYA for DASH STUDIO. I handed him the screenplay two days after I had completed writing it. He went through the opening scene and thought the hook was bloody terrific. Before I began writing, I had informed him of the twist at the end. No sooner I gave him the screenplay; he was tempted to read the last page. But I warned him that reading the last page first would spoil the fun. He agreed.

The reason for his delay in reading is because presently he is busy shooting the last four episodes of HINITHUNVELAASHEY KALAA. I am estimating that he would wrap up the shooting within 7-10 days. However, I couldn’t wait for that long.

My current rewrites are based on the very constructive comments given by my beloved wife. She always has this opportunity to read all my screenplays before anyone else does, straight from the softcopy in my laptop. However, for RAANIYA, I had to make her a hardcopy as well because she was more comfortable reading while lying down than sitting near the laptop to read through 150 pages. She was having lower back pain at that time.

Her feedbacks made me wonder why not I had thought of what she had thought. As usual, she has made some improvements on the dialogues, but to her surprise this time around, they were few and far between. She felt the dialogues rock. She always urges me to make them simple and reminds me that less is more.

However, it was the comments she gave on one of the principal character’s inner self that made the difference. Those comments have made the character look three dimensional, and the scenes that character appears have become very intense and more believable. Wish I could reveal the character and those changes. But doing so would spoil the entire storyline. No lawsuits.

Regardless of some heated discussion we had, she loved the overall screenplay and the way it was structured. And the twist she thought was excellent. She rated RAANIYA being more dramatic and livelier than VAALOABI ENGEYNAMA…

Three cheers to her.

I will be doing more rewrites once FATTHAAH comes with his feedback. But that will not happen until 7-10 days later.

writing RAANIYA…

I have re-structured and started re-writing RAANIYA, which was written by AISHATH NEENA several years ago. Following are the major facelift I have given for my version of the screenplay.

  • I have updated the major plot points of the storyline to make it more acceptable by today’s audience. At the period the original screenplay was written, mobile phones were not introduced.
  • The screenplay has been given a non-linear treatment from its straightforward storytelling. My version opens with a powerful and not to mention a very bloody hook that ends with several questions that will be revealed at the final half of the film. Between the opening and the closing, the story shifts from now and then but in a very comprehensive way.
  • Most importantly, the character’s ages have been upped to suit for a more mature audience since I felt that the concept sounds more dramatic that way. Originally it had characters that were below twenty years of age.

RAANIYA is about the titular protagonist, who had to suppress her love for a man due to a tragic turn of events. However, her past comes to haunt her yet with more dire consequences. I think I have said enough about the storyline. Can I stop?

To date, I have completed 17 scenes which is like 20 minutes even if filmed at a slower pace. The story flow feels incredible and fresh. More than one way, RAANIYA is more profound and engaging than Neena’s previous story VAALOABI ENGEYNAMA… RAANIYA has more flawed characters who seek redemption. Now, that’s my favourite territory I always love to explore. See how RAANIYA fares.

I am hoping to complete the first draft by the end of this month.

RAANIYA to be rewritten…

Ramadan mubarik to all the readers.
This evening I have been commissioned by ABDUL FATTHAAH to re-write RAANIYA which DASH STUDIO started production several years ago helmed by SEMI MUSTAFA. Back then the production was on and off several times and later was halted for a reason I have no clue. SEMI had completed 90% of the shooting, but DASH STUDIO owner wants it to be re-done. This has been a pet project of his.
RAANIYA was written by AISHATH NEENA, the author behind the story of VAALOABI ENGEYNAMA… which won 11 awards at the 5th National Film Awards. I wrote the screenplay for that film too, ahem, in case you didn’t know!
FATTHAAH is confirmed to direct for DASH STUDIO in association with his studio RED PRODUCTIONS.
I have the original screenplay written by NEENA and will go through it during the next 3 to 5 days from today. I am not sure what the story is about but all I know is that I am going to enjoy any story by NEENA. Her story of VAALOABI ENGEYNAMA I thoroughly enjoyed even though I hate reading. The title, RAANIYA refers to the protagonist who is a girl. The story must be about her. Well, good then!
I am scheduling to finish the first draft by the end of this month. Will keep you all posted about the story, the screenplay and the progress.

HINITHUVELAASHEY KALAA completed

Last night, the rain was falling busily. It had been like that since morning. It rained cats and dogs, drizzled, subsided and then some. While rain splattered outside in unpredictable fashion, I was inside my living area beside my laptop feverishly typing the last few scenes of the last episode of HINITHUNVELAASHEY KALAA. Episode 52 warmed my heart and body despite the chilly ambience the rain had created and despite the fact that I was only wearing shorts.

FAZU decides to leave Male’ since she had given up any hope of winning her childhood love, ASLAM. The chances of INA winning SHIZAN slims every second. Events turn and emotions stir and rise when FAZU finally meets her father she never knew. What happens thereafter would spoil the storyline. Therefore, before I get more tempted to reveal the details, I end this post. However, I must add that my ever loving wife who is also my inspiration and my muse helped me remove some corny dialogues. She always urges me to make them original.

Around 2045 hours, I finished the final scene of episode 52 which is also the final scene of HINITHUNVELAASHEY KALAA. I celebrated the wrapping up with a wrapping up of my arms around my wife. She wrapped back. I was fully warmed up despite the cold night due to the chilly rain that was falling outside busily.