Mahdi Ahmed

Scripting waves of imagination from the sunny side of the Maldives.

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REVISING LEYKARUNAIN

LEYKARUNAIN (TEARS IN BLOOD) which I wrote last year as a directing vehicle for top director FATTHAAH is moving forward. He is scheduling to begin principal photography on either mid or late January next year. That’s like less than two months away.

Currently, FATTHAAH is busy working with his music director on composing the five songs included in the film. He also reports that he is working closely with the lyricist as well on writing the lyrics especially the theme song which progresses the film rapidly and is a major turning point of the story. The way he has described the lyrics and his visuals, I feel that FATTHAAH is more than ready to direct what he does best, romantic-dramas. But consider this movie a tragic-romantic-drama. I have no doubt that he can handle the romantic-drama part with his eyes closed. I’m more interested on seeing how he translates the tragic part to screen. All I can tell is that it has to be visually very intense. And I’m pretty sure he is equal to the task.

For most part of last year and this year, FATTHAAH has been wandering on horror land as a director and as a production manager for some of the horror gigs produced by DASH STUDIO where he is working at presently. He believes that LEYKARUNAIN will show a different visual style he has never undertaken in any of his previously directed films. I am more excited.

Since there’s plenty of time for production to begin and it’s been a while since I have written it, I have told FATTHAAH that I am going to rework on the screenplay. It’s not a rewrite but a simple revising. He does know that if a screenplay is kept for a long time unproduced, it’s always wise to go through it again before production starts. One will always find key areas in the screenplay that either needs to be updated or amended. Time does changes the look and feel of an unproduced screenplay.

Likewise, I have started revising LEYKARUNAIN this morning around four thirty. Weirdly, that’s always been my favorite hour where I find my creativity at highest. I have already completed act one and have so far changed some dialogues and amended three key scenes. Believe me, the revised scenes look great, add more power to the development of characters and give depth to the relationship between the concerned characters. Awesome!

I am hoping that when done revising, I will get my writing groove back so that I can wrap up MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY (COME MY BABY’S FATHER) before that screenplay renames itself as MIKOE WRITER BAEY BAEY (COME MY BABY’S WRITER). That’s why I really have to stop this post immediately and go back to revise LEYKARUNAIN.

Cheers!

THE BLOCKBUSTER I COULDN’T WRITE

I think it was two or three years ago, I was at then FOOD GARDEN, now CHICOS. Is it CHICOS that place is now called? Anyways, it was one of the popular open air fast food outlets at the artificial beach at that time. It was around 1900 hours. I was sitting with DV PRODUCTION head, MOHAMED ABDULLA aka MUHAMMA and most sought after actress, NIUMA MOHAMED. We were all having coffee.

MUHAMMA wanted me to write a screenplay based on a story that was being narrated by NIUMA which was based on true events. After the story, I was feeling pale and found myself gasping for fresh air. The content of the story really sunk me deep down in to the ground. It was really sickening. I couldn’t even finish up the already turned cold coffee that was only sipped once.

MUHAMMA said he was considering NIUMA to direct it and she was physically willing to go through everything that was told in the story. She was even ready to shave her head to stay faithful to the true events about a young girl who was sexually abused by her father.

I told MUHAMMA that I needed all the information and everything they knew about this story written on paper.  We only agreed verbally.

Unfortunately that was the only meeting we had, which three years later, on 25th October 2010 was released as a film called NIUMA, considered a blockbuster before its release and currently showing on Olympus.

So what really went wrong with me not writing NIUMA? Actually, nothing. I would call it bad timing. After the preliminary meeting we had, if I could recall, I heard from MUHAMMA several weeks later to hand over the notes. Unfortunately, I was busy writing another screenplay. Since I was miles away from finishing, MUHAMMA decided to assign popular and always in demand, legendary storywriter, IBRAHIM WAHEED aka BIMMA. His decision couldn’t have been, simply perfect. Rest is history.

After watching NIUMA, I realized I couldn’t have topped the screenplay written by BIMMA. He has given a different perspective than the screenplay I first had in mind. If, mind you all readers, only if I had written it, my take would follow  MUA who tries to win NIUMA, unbeknown of her condition and her mentality.

The audience will get to reveal the skeleton in her closet through his eyes. And since NIUMA despises men strongly, MUA never gets to win her trust until the climax where she realizes that he indeed loves her truly, when he takes matters in to his own hand by killing her father. Love will indeed set you free… by any means.

I can almost see the frown on your face, dear readers. That’s why I’m going to stop this before you all consider me, whatever you want to consider me as.

Cheers!

BEHIND SCHEDULE

I was hoping by now I have completed writing atleast a draft of MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY (COME MY BABY’S FATHER). But sometimes hopes are stalled abruptly. I am still unable to keep up with the schedule of writing MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY. Yes, I was supposed to start writing last weekend. Sadly, other than typing out the file name, the word document on my laptop remains blank.  I haven’t written a sentence yet, let alone a word.

After I recovered from the flu, for some odd reasons I am not aware of, I have sprained my groin. I am incapable of moving a muscle in my right leg without having to go through so much of pain. Believe me, it hurts a lot. And when I am suffering, I cannot be creative. When I cannot be creative, I cannot write.

I am doing all I can to nurse this right leg issue of mine. I can’t wait to start writing MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY. It’s been awhile since I structured the whole thing. And I don’t usually stay this long without starting to write. I am hoping that I get well soon in couple of days time.

Speaking of illnesses, it’s just not me who is unwell. Even editing of SAZAA has hit with an ailment of its own.  Semi started editing SAZAA by dividing it in to seven separate projects, with each project having X number of scenes so that it would be easier to start other post production works such as color grading as soon as editing of each project is completed without having to wait for the whole film to be edited in one whole project. At the time I published my last post, Semi was editing the fifth project. As he was nearing completion of this project, tragedy struck. The project failed to load the next day. He and director Munavvar with help from Ted, the technical consultant of this film have tried every possible way to restore this damaged project. But to no avail, they weren’t successful. Eighteen long minutes of editing, gone.

Director Munnavar has asked Semi to keep that project and resume with the remaining two projects. And to re-edit the damaged project later. Semi has begun work on the sixth. Semi, actor Ismail Rasheed , director Munavvar and myself had a preview of the edited parts of this new project. It really looks good. For a newcomer, the direction is promising, acting is topnotch especially by Ismail Rasheed and editing by Semi is making all the difference. He’s making everyone involve look good, including my screenplay. Hats off to him!

If nothing goes awry with the computer system, hopefully for coming weekend, Semi will have the remaining projects edited. I can’t wait to see the whole rough cut.

Looks like I’ve got to type off with this post. The pain on my right leg is getting worse. Ouch!

SYSTEM RESTORED…

The crashed computer system at KID PRODUCTION studio where SAZAA (PUNISHMENT) is being edited has been restored a little while ago, with a little help from me. Well, I’m no whizkid but somehow I managed to fix it. I haven’t a clue how I did it but I just did it. Period.

After the system was restored, I watched the new parts Semi has edited and they look simply fabulous. Semi is back at editing where he left off when the system was crashed. The man is happy and so am I.

Before I left the studio, I asked Semi to show me the bittersweet scene he edited the other day which has turned out to be my favorite scene. But this time I asked Semi to add a melancholy music track, which I have been keeping in my pendrive that I have been listening to when I began writing this unfinished screenplay that was halted after the first act many years ago. The music track fits to this particular scene like a glove. It’s awesome, bittersweet and endearing. Best of all this scene never had any dialogues yet I could feel the deep love between the two leads. Simply magical.

Semi and I have negotiated with SAZAA director Hussain Munavvar to start production on a new film. He can get hold of a story written by any popular story writers around. Then he can leave the rest for me. And once he completes principal photography, Semi can take over post-production. Munavvar said he will think about it.

On MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY (COME MY BABY’S FATHER), I am ready to begin writing. Hopefully tomorrow, I will start clattering my keyboard. Stay tuned…

ERRATUM…

In my previous two posts, I have made a typing mistake. Thanks to screenwriter Ahmed Rasheed for bringing it to my attention. I typed the title of his screenplay as MIKOE BAPPA AADHEY AADHEY. However, it should read as MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY which also means COME MY BABY’S FATHER. In case you all didn’t know, the title is actually a lullaby.

As for an update on rewriting this screenplay, I am almost done with the re-structuring. Writing will begin soon. I’m estimating to wrap up the final screenplay within a week.

Meanwhile, we have also started on production logistics. Last night, we asked screenwriter Ahmed Rasheed to contact the house owner of the house he suggested that we should set the production. Ahmed was prompt at helping us. Now the ball is in our court. Ahmed said the house owner wants us to call to hold discussion on the production details. Sometime last night, Ravi should have called the house owner. I will update once I hear from Ravi.

Still staying with this project, Ravi has come up with this idea of including an end credits song for the film in the vein of the song we have included in INGILI. But MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY will have a completely different take. More on this later…

I have wrapped up subtitling JINNI and it’s been handed over to Fatthaah. I felt that this film had an anti-climax considering the horniness the she-jinn were brewing ever since she saw Seezan, the protagonist as a toddler. Looks like djinns too have pedophiles amongst them. And unfortunately, it was hilarious to see when she-jinn finally blows, ahem, all this blood gets splattered. I always thought djinns were made out of fire. Probably not horny djinns…

Editing of SAZAA (PUNISHMENT) is going swiftly. Hopefully tonight, I will get to see the new parts Semi has edited.

I have been really warming up on the proposition made by Youppe. I’m thinking of closing that deal with him by restarting my already structured screenplay, 40 (FOURTY). But it might not be the final decision. I’m still warming up a little bit more. All I know is that I will say yes, but with which screenplay is the question.

And on a final note, today I started office at a new location. Instantly, my brain went to a coma. It’s still sleeping.

STILL LOST IN TRANSLATION…

The last time I posted an article, I was ‘lost in translation’. That was on May 13, 2009. A year, 2 months and 17 days later, guess what? I’m still lost in translation!

Back then I was lost translating Fatthaah produced VAA LOABI ENGEYNAMA… (IF YOU KNEW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU…). But this time around, I am lost translating his directed JINNI (DJINN). Before you all disappear in fright hearing the word Jinni, let me assure that this film doesn’t scare a bit because rather than being a scary Jinni, it has an overly horny one. Then again, whatever horniness that that she-Jinn does with Seezan, the protagonist was either out of the frame or behind the camera. Anyway, after close to three hours of horniness, whoops, sorry I mean translation, I am left with few minutes of running time to wrap up this project.

Before I begin recapping what I did during my absence from blogging, here’s the main reason why I was absent. I was frustrated and was on a nervous breakdown because of how things turned out for my first co-producing gig, INGILI (FINGER). There, I’ve said it as simple as I could and it’s all true!

At the time I posted my last article, I was way too busy with the pre-production of INGILI. However, once the principal photography started on May 17, 2009 in K. Gulhi, unfortunately from there everything went downhill. INGILI was topped with one unfortunate incident after another. The production which was scheduled for five days, stretched to fifteen days because of bad weather and other major unforeseen events. The budget skyrocketed. And then there were creative differences, theft and accidents amongst other things. Probably fate was enraged thinking that we were referring INGILI to the wrong finger. Who knows, fate works in mysterious ways!

And I couldn’t be more right. Fate kept mother of all tragedies for INGILI until principal photography was over. On August 10, 2009, the producers of INGILI had the most shocking news that the story of INGILI was not an original and it was a complete rip-off of the last segment, THE MAN FROM THE HOLLYWOOD of 1995 released FOUR ROOMS. Upon hearing the news, the producers fizzled out. We were shattered. That was the last nail in our coffin. INGILI was shelved indefinitely. Music soars and drops abruptly. FADE OUT.

To a black screen in white appears, MORE THAN A YEAR LATER… FADE OUT.

FADE IN. July 16, 2010. Popular local heavy metal band, TRAPHIC JAM released their album that night. Their album includes the end credit song of INGILI with the same titular name which they made for the film itself. During this function, before the band performed that song live, the first official trailer of INGILI was released. The trailer received a warm reception from the crowd. INGILI producers have woken up from their long deep sleep, without a kiss though. INGILI is back on track again. However, I must admit that there’s lot of work to be done. We have fast tracked the project for a late December 2010 or an early January 2011 release. Let’s hope fate has made truce and have realized that we were referring to an entirely different finger.

During my absence, the screenplay, VAFAATHERI KEHIVERIYA (FAITHFUL TRICKSTER) which I wrote for Seezan, for some reason I don’t know, was shelved. Apparently, he did fly to Sri Lanka for location scouting, but something stopped him from going any further with the production. No reason was explained until a month back, my friend Zareer, with whom I have co-written some unproduced screenplays, tells me that Seezan met with him asking him to re-write my screenplay. Now, that kind of made me unintentionally deduce why Seezan shelved the screenplay. Simply, he wasn’t satisfied with it. I must recall, he wasn’t satisfied with the first write either. Jeez! What do I call his actions? If he had a problem with the screenplay, shouldn’t he have spoken with me first?

Speaking of not acknowledging my efforts in anyway, head of YAARAA PRODUCTIONS comes second. She hired me to write a screenplay called MAMMA (MOTHER) based on a real incident happened before her very own eyes. After tiresome structuring and some deliberately quick writing, I presented a draft to which she was to made changes so that it would save time for her and me to amend a draft rather than the final screenplay. Once she made the changes, I planned on writing the final screenplay. That’s what I explained her upon giving the draft. She was supposed to submit the changes within a week. But alas, since then five months have passed. I am yet to hear of a single amendment. All I am hearing now is that her production company is getting ready to produce MAMMA (MOTHER). What do I call her actions? I’m lost for words here. Help, please!

Late last year, I completed a feature length screenplay for Fatthaah called LEYKARUNAIN (TEARS IN BLOOD) to be produced by DASH STUDIOS. Due to few setbacks in completing the songs needed for the film, the project kept postponing. Now Fatthaah reports that, he will begin principal photography in late October, not next year but this year. Thank God, I really do want any of my screenplays get produced rather than being shelved!

In short, LEYKARUNAIN is a romantic drama with couple of issues I have tried to make controversial. Then again, how controversial it gets depends on how FATTHAAH translates the screenplay to the screen. I hope he does a good job. He has been treading on horror land for some time now. Maybe it’s time that he gets back to what he does best with LEYKARUNAIN. He still has RAANIYA put on hold for next year.

Around late April Hussain Munavvar, head of KID PRODUCTION asked me to doctor a screenplay called SAZAA (PUNISHMENT) which was written by a screenwriting friend of his. She was the one who took home best story for a television series at the Crystal Awards held on April 17, 2008 where I was nominated three times while she was nominated only once. Munavvar was set to direct and was a week away from principal photography. After a read, I told him that the screenplay needed more than few patching up to do. In fact, it needed to be re-structured, characters re-developed and the entire screenplay re-written. And to do that I told him I needed fifteen days. He then signed me up to rewrite within the estimated time.

I restored the basic plot of the original screenplay and did a complete overhaul with new plot points, believable circumstances, strong characters and a wicked twist at the end. Man, I love to twist… wickedly! I wrote the first half within a week and that was enough for Munavvar to start principal photography. And I planned on shipping the final half before they could finish shooting the first half.

With just two days away from sailing to B. Maalhos for principal photography, Munavvar faced a casting difficulty. One of the actors playing a principal role was having an attitude problem and was too overly demanding. Munavvar found it difficult to handle the situation. He then had an emergency meeting with Eternal Pictures honcho, Ted who advised on giving that part to the actor who was already set to play the leading role. Munavvar took Ted’s advice, dropped the problematic actor from the casting list and then gave the leading part to a promising young actor who had never played a major role in a feature film so far. Munavvar informed me of the changes and I brought all those changes to the screenplay immediately. In the end, the whole casting changes turned out to be a blessing in disguise. These changes gave the screenplay a certain fierceness that was missing from the first rewrite.

Principal photography of SAZAA has been completed and is currently on the editing table. To my delight, Munavvar hired Semi as the editor with whom I have collaborated on VAA LOABI ENGEYNAMA… He won best editor at the National Awards and we both shared best sound for the same film the same year. Semi has already edited the first 45 minutes and I must say that it’s looking good.

After I completed SAZAA, during May I started INDHIRAAS (DECADENCE) for DHEKEDHEKEVES PRODUCTIONS as a starring vehicle for actor MUAA ABDULLA. Though the story is kept under very tight wraps, I can spill few beans. This would have the most physically demanding role for any actor in the local film industry, yet. The protagonist is an anti-hero who is also a low life who sees his life slipping in to decadence. I wrapped up INDHIRAAS two days after World Cup 2010 started.

Then there’s another screenplay I’m responsible to write which is sort of an unofficial sequel to a TVM produced made for television movie called ORCHID EYNAAGE MAA (ORCHID, HER FLOWER). It was aired more than 20 years ago and my screenplay is supposed to pick up the main character 20 or more years later. The leading actor of that movie, MOHAMED RASHEED aka DHARAA acquired the rights and assigned me to write. To prepare myself for the task given, I even had a face to face conversation with its legendary director, Hussain Shihab. I explained to him on my take for the follow up. He gave me very helpful tips, ideas and I must say that that meeting with him was very memorable. I even have his blessings.

Three weeks back, as I was seriously in to structuring this screenplay, out of nowhere I hit a snag. I fell in to a writer’s block due to some frustrating events that took place at my office. Even mentioning about it here, gives me a migraine attack. So I’ll save my weakened head. Presently, I am fighting hard to get my writing mood back. I have already informed Rasheed about my dire situation and he was very understanding.

Last but not least, the producing partners of INGILI have bought all the rights of a short screenplay called MIKOE BAPPA AADHEY AADHEY (COME MY BABY’S FATHER) written by Ahmed Rasheed, a rookie screenwriter who is a friend of mine from L. Fonadhoo. He also heads a production house in his island called MANDHEYRAA PRODUCTIONS. It all happened when he mailed me this screenplay, his very first screenplay to comment. I found his 26 paged screenplay had potential for a feature length movie, just like the short story of INGILI. On his request, I met with few producers whom I thought might be interested in buying this screenplay. Everyone I spoke with said they were interested but failed to collect the soft copy of the screenplay for a read. Even Ahmed met in person with one of the high profile actor-producer-director who was at the time shooting a film there in Ahmed’s island. Ahmed said this actor took the screenplay for a read and was never heard of him again.

Few weeks later when all hope was lost, when Ahmed finally decided to produce his screenplay through his own production house as a short film, I had an emergency meeting with my producing partners and explained the boldness in his screenplay. Then I called Ahmed and asked him that we were very interested and if he could change his mind on selling his screenplay. The very next day, Ahmed spoke with his collaborators and decided on selling his screenplay to us. That was when my second producing partner, Ravi of R² PRODUCTIONS had a read and gave the green light. I called Ahmed and sealed the deal immediately. The rights to his screenplay were acquired on July 24, 2010.

MIKOE BAPPA AADHEY AADHEY is about two characters at one location which has a resemblance to, yes, the concept of INGILI. But this time the two characters are of opposite sex. I don’t want to reveal too much about this screenplay which I am currently structuring for a 75 to 90 minute feature. I will shed more light on this when this is made official. Until then, I end this article.

Thank you for reading…

INGILI set construction pictures…

I have received four exclusive pictures of the construction of INGILI set in K. GULHI. Sadly, they are in low resolution. However, the chief carpenter overseeing the construction reports that the work is going fine in high resolution quality and they are going to give our production team, especially director RAVI a real surprise.

Today TED, our production consultant gave us the idea of presenting the set to the people of K. GULHI as a token after production ends. We thought it was a splendid idea.

After the production, we are scheduled to revisit the set to shoot the music video of the end credit song.

Producer/ director RAVI and the entire production team were delighted with the progress.

More news, later.

what, a song in INGILI?

It’s not just any song that the production team has decided to include at the end credits of INGLI. This evening, we had a special meeting after the usual meeting we have with TED, our production consultant. It was yet again over coffee with, no, not with Karan, but with a heavy metal band who’s at times very controversial and has taken the Maldivian youth by storm. At this point, I’m not allowed to reveal the name of the band for several reasons which I cannot write for several other reasons. Oh man, this is so hard not to disclose the band’s name. I wish I’m permitted to give a hint, at least.

The band consisted of their famous leader, their drummer and their guitarist. From the production team’s side, director/ producer RAVI, producer/ actor, the other actor who is overseeing the construction of the set, our DP and then there was me. Guess I too should give myself a  cool slashed designation. I’m producer slash screenwriter then.

The band was delighted with our proposal to include their song for the end credits of INGILI. We gave a brief verbal presentation of INGILI storyline and they felt, it was nothing short of being extra-ordinary. The entire production team of INGILI was flattered. I’m sure our grins would put a Cheshire cat to shame.

Apart from composing a song for INGILI, the band was willing to offer any help they can give to the production of the film. INGILI will make history in Dhivehi film making, if no other Dhivehi film releases before INGILI with an inclusion of an exclusive heavy metal song.

I’m asked to prepare a small summary of INGILI so that the band can start work on the lyrics immediately. However, at the moment they are busy with several shows. After mid-May, they are going to be free and have planned working on the entire music composition of the song to be included in INGILI.

In the meantime, the production team of INGILI and the band will be signing an understanding over the rights of the song. More news on that, as it happens. In short, it was one of the memorable meetings out of memorable meetings the production team of INGILI have almost everyday over coffee with, no, not with Karan, once again…

PINK FAIRY rough cut…

Today, I had the opportunity to view a rough cut of PINK FAIRY, a children’s movie to be released in June by FATTHAAH. However, it’s directed by his current DP, VISHAAN (aka KANDI).

I wouldn’t want to spoil the storyline, but PINK FAIRY had some good fantasy moments and had a family appeal to it. But I felt that the film could have been much better had FATTHAAH worked on the screenplay at the pre-preproduction stage. After viewing, I gave my feedback and emphasized on areas that could be improved to give PINK FAIRY more strength as a film. Few additional scenes and a reshoot of a very important scene, which now hurts character development of the protagonist, would make PINKY FAIRY a delightful treat for the entire family. FATTHAAH said he would consider my feedbacks.

I am not going to give a review of the film but I am tempted to mention that the performances given by the child actor and her father played by a budding actor look promising. I don’t remember seeing such good chemistry between a child and a father in a Dhivehi movie before. Both of them are two diamonds in the rough, so I thought.

Since I watched a rough cut, all the visual effect shots, music and natural sound were not included. Even then, the film had a charm. I am not sure if I am supposed to write this post on PINK FAIRY, but I hope to God, FATTHAAH wouldn’t mind.

INGILI set green lit…

Late this evening, production team of INGILI has green lit the construction of INGILI set to the quotation given by the crew at K. GULHI. They have been waiting for our confirmation. We have scheduled three days for the set construction. As planned, once the set is constructed our team will travel to K. GULHI for an inspection. Shooting begins after that. We are pushing principal photography for an April 30th start.

Budgeting of INGILI is ongoing fast. We have divided the budgeting in to three parts. Our actor, who had connection with K. GULHI  is liaising with the crew there working out the budgeting of the construction of INGILI set which has been marked completed. He will also work on the rates for accommodation, food and other important tasks that will be carried out in K. GULHI.

Our production manager is on props and every other task required for the whole production.

Meanwhile, our DP is budgeting and at the same time scheduling the 5 nights shooting in K. GULHI.

Hopefully, with in a day or two, budget for all three parts will be completed. Then the production team will sit down to finalize the budget. After that, the three producers will hook up to obtain finance for the finalized budget.

The team is very excited that we are getting closer and closer to the production. Just can’t wait for  principal photography to be started.