Mahdi Ahmed

Scripting waves of imagination from the sunny side of the Maldives.

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EDITING DHILAKANI

Until the producer of DHILAKANI (Fire Sparks) officially announces the talented editor who was recently appointed to edit the film, I have no authority whatsoever to reveal his name. That’s why I’m going to address him as the editor henceforth. So here’s the latest update on it.

The editor has started editing on Tuesday night, two hours after he agreed to the contractual terms of service. He has already edited twenty minutes which is quite a rapid progress considering he works only four hours each day.

Minutes after the contract was signed, to celebrate the editor’s on boarding, director Hussain Munavvaru threw a small party on his behalf on Tuesday evening at Dinemore Garden. Almost everyone who was present including the leading actor of the film, Ismail Rasheed looked as if we all wanted an immediate dive into the sea bordering the open air section of the restaurant. We all ordered submarines!

Director Hussain Munavvaru reports that the cut looks awesome and he’s very pleased. He would surely put the Cheshire cat to shame. Both smiles even have a resemblance. I’m yet to see any of the editing done. Hopefully tomorrow I will. I just can’t wait to see even a minute of it.

Also staying with DHILAKANI, director Munavvaru has appointed Ravee Farooq to produce all the promotional video materials needed for the film including all the trailers. Last night, I have mailed Ravee a soft copy of the film’s screenplay. The first official trailer of INGILI (Finger) and MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY (Come My Baby’s Father) were compiled by Ravee. Both trailers received rave reviews. Awesome!

Well, that’s all I have for now. Before I type off, Eid greetings to all.

Cheers!

INGILI AND DHILAKANI UPDATES

INGILI (Finger) which is near completion has finally made into IMDB. The site will also have the official poster of the film on display which is yet to be officially unveiled. Below is the link to IMDB.

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt2425470/

As producers of INGILI, Hussain Munavvaru and I met with composer Mohamed Ikram yesterday evening over an unplanned coffee. Ikram confirmed that in coming two to three days, all the work including sound design will be wrapped up and handed over to director Ravee who is also serving as a producer.

Few days back, Ikram uploaded the theme of INGILI on facebook. Check it out from the following link.

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_14883519

In other news, over the same coffee of yesterday, Hussain Munavvaru as the director of DHILAKANI (Fire Sparks) invited the most sought after editors of the industry. He discussed with the latter over editing DHILAKANI. At the moment I decline to mention his name since his name will be announced officially by the film’s producer.

All terms were agreed verbally between both Munnavaru and the editor. And sometime today the contract will be signed so that he can start work immediately starting tonight. He has agreed to come up with a rough cut in two weeks.

Well, that’s all for now. Stay tuned for more updates.

Cheers!

DHILAKANI, MAROCCHINO AND TWO UPDATES

Director Hussain Munavvaru including his cast and crew have returned from Shaviyani Atoll this morning after completing majority of principal photography of DHIKALANI (FIRE SPARKS). I just came from his studio after watching couple of dailies. They look absolutely great! The performance from all the actors were outstanding, Munavvaru’s direction looked solid and photography by Maskey was well handled. Their work was beyond my expectation.

The production of DHILAKANI started off in Male’ in late August. After shooting all the scenes required to be shot in Male’ except for two historical scenes, production was then shifted to Feevaku of Shaviyani Atoll. Most of the shooting was done there before leaving to Foakaidhoo of the same atoll.

DHILAKANI was inspired from one of my favorite films of Hollywood which was released some 18 years ago. However, my screenplay deals with one man’s tumultuous journey to seek vengeance, his undoing and his eventual redemption from an unlikeliest of sources. Some of the ultra violent scenes in the film were based on real incidents that were happened in different corners of Maldives in recent times. The film also has a political subplot which I think, if I’m not wrong, is a subject new in Dhivehi films. If some filmmakers contradict this, I sincerely apologize.

In other news, due to some financial issues, I was asked by my client to stall writing the dramedy I was going to start next and for which I have lost enough sleep and hair too. Though temporarily, I felt a ton off my both shoulders, that’s a total of two tons. But those tons will occupy my both shoulders once again when I’m asked to resume writing. Until then I can do some arm circles and rocky presses.

This evening I met with Ravee at L’Aquila, not the Italian city I mean. This place is my favorite coffee hangout these days. I simply love the ambiance and the woody interior. And their Illy Marocchino is my latest craving. An espresso shot with cocoa powder and milk froth, it’s yummy! Anyway, where was I? Yes, my meeting with Ravee.

We discussed on the final installment of our two characters at one location trilogy. We brainstormed on couple of additions here and there to my already done rough screenplay outlining. I must say the meeting was very productive. We even developed the two female characters and how their interaction with each other will be throughout the film. I’m so tempted to reveal in detail everything we discussed but this storyline needs to be kept under wraps.

Before I really giveaway any spoilers, I end this post.

Cheers!

AN UNRELATED TRILOGY

Some years ago, while I was busy writing INGILI (Finger) which was based on an award winning short story written by a fourteen year old student at the National Short Story Competition 2007, Ravee and I came up with this idea of turning the main concept of this short story into a trilogy. But this trilogy wasn’t going to be related to each other. All three films will have a standalone narrative within the concept of two characters in one location.

INGILI has the same concept but the proceedings takes place between two male characters inside a small hut at the beach on a very rainy night. We bought all the rights of this short story for an undisclosed amount and in no time I came up with a screenplay. At that time, actor Muaa was also a co-producer alongside Ravee and me. But due to few personal problems Muaa backed out from producing. Then cinematographer Hussain Munnavvaru took the reins as the third producer.

Things were fast tracked and soon, the production was green lit and principal photography started in Kaafu Gulhi. We built a set from scratch on the beach of this island. We even devised a pipe system to create rain with full manual control.

However, things went downhill from the very first day the cast and crew sailed off to begin production which was scheduled for five straight days. Even before the cast and crew reached the island of Gulhi, the ferry they were sailing stopped in the middle of the sea with an engine failure. Bad luck kept hitting one after the other throughout the entire production. It looked as if the production of INGILI had bad luck written all over.

The first night of shooting was delayed by hours because the pipe system mysteriously failed. The crew had no time to fix it thereafter. Thus, rain was then created the old-fashioned way by using a water pump and a hosepipe. But then something else slowed down our control on the set. Suddenly, the weather turned all bad. Since the set was made outdoor, production was unable to continue at a long stretch.

So whenever the weather turned favorable, shooting resumed, sometimes for an hour and then waited without shooting for many hours until rain subsided. Bad luck kept prevailing. The water pumps crashed several times. One of the crew even had a bad cut on his hand while fixing a water pump. The pressure was piling on the five days schedule which in the end was extended to fifteen long days. Soon the shoe-string budget smashed the ceiling. We were really botched up big time.

Few days after the production team returned from shooting, we hit the biggest of all snags. We found out that the short story which my screenplay was based on was actually a rip-off of a concept of the fourth segment of FOUR ROOMS. That was the last nail that was driven hard in to our coffin. Post production went to a dead halt. The passion we had in making the mother of all experimental movies soon disappeared. Editing went at snail’s pace. After the rough cut was made, I don’t remember having watched it. Post production of INGILI was buried not just six but several feet under.

Two years later, for reasons unknown, we decided to resurrect INGILI. So we pulled it up from the grave and resumed post-production. But at the time when post-production of INGILI was stalled, Ravee and I began working on the second installment of our trilogy. This time the two characters were a male and a female and the location was inside the apartment they both lived.

During the two years we desisted working on INGILI, a friend of mine I befriended through either MSN or Facebook, which one I’m not sure, thanks to old age creeping in each passing day, asked me if I could comment on a screenplay he wrote for a short film.

He is Ahmed Rasheed from Laamu Fonadhoo and heads a production house there called Mandheyra Production. He mailed his screenplay of 26 pages. It was called MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY (Come My Baby’s Father). After a gripping read, I found it had all the elements needed for the second installment to our trilogy and moreover it had great potential to be made into a feature film. But I didn’t tell Ahmed about this since he asked me to find a producer who might be interested in buying his screenplay and Ravee and I were in no shape to invest on producing another film anytime soon. None of the producers I met with were ready to take a commercial risk. Even Ahmed met in person with a high profile actor-director who was at that time shooting a film in his island. Even to this day, Ahmed has never heard of him ever again.

When neither Ahmed nor I could attach any producers to the screenplay, Ahmed decided to produce it on his own. I met with Ravee immediately and told him about the screenplay. Ravee was thrilled and asked me to negotiate with Ahmed. I called Ahmed the very next day. I asked him if he was willing to sell his screenplay to us so that once we have enough funding we could produce it. He spoke with his collaborators at his production house. Fortunately, they decided to sell all the rights to us as they knew the screenplay was going to be in good hands. Ravee had a read and when he gave me the green light, I sealed the deal with Ahmed within that week. If I remember correctly, the rights were bought on the last week of July 2010.

The outlining of MBBB went pretty neatly but writing was not immediate. I remember having few delays on the latter due to several health issues I faced and a month long fasting season that fell in between. But many months later I finally rewrote the screenplay with a more in-depth screen story including much more layered characters and a very disturbing back-story. Ahmed’s screenplay was completely re-imagined and revamped.

At the time of writing MBBB I couldn’t think of any other actor but Rishmy for the leading role. Ravee met with her and convinced her to accept the role. Even Ahmed had her on his mind and casting her really paid off. She not only played her character with great aplomb, but she gave a much needed grit to her character.

In one simple wide shot that was revealed in the first official trailer of MBBB where Rishmy carries an unconscious Manik on her shoulder and climbs the stairs is a moment to behold. I must give three cheers to Rishmy since she decided to do it herself. And that shot more than described the sheer strength of her character in the film.

For this particular scene, in my screenplay I wrote close up shots of her feet ascending the stairs and a close up shot of Manik thinking that any actress who played that role wouldn’t be able to achieve that feat in a wide shot. Even Ravee wanted to follow the screenplay. But it was Rishmy who insisted on going for the wide shot. She went the distance and made her character all too plausible. In the film, Rishmy plays a determined mother who would do anything to protect her child even by risking her own life. Need I to say more?

After I rewrote the screenplay of MBBB, Ravee and I approached several producers. Sadly they all declined because of the risky concept which the screenplay was based on and they didn’t forsee dollar signs twinkling from their eyes.

Just to give one last shot at MBBB going in front of the camera real soon, we approached producer Mohamed Ali aka Mogre, the honcho of Dark Rain Entertainment (DRE). He green lit the production almost immediately. Ravee and I were really surprised. Soon we both met with Mogre and cinematographer Shifau and fast tracked production in no time. Rishmy accepted the role without any hesitation and Manik was offered the leading male role though we wanted a rookie at first. We realized Manik inhibited the characteristic of that role far stronger than anyone we could think of. Rishmy and Manik was a perfect match.

Principal photography of MBBB started on 17th April 2012. It was made on a shoe-string budget compared to the other films DRE has produced so far. Photography was wrapped up in thirteen or fifteen days. At present, editing has been done including dubbing. All the CGI shots are made except for one which will be completed in two days time. Currently the final cut is ready for music and sound design. Ravee has already started working on a second trailer based on very positive comments we have received. So stay tuned.

Going back to the current status of INGILI, composer Mohamed Ikram has finished music including sound design. Ravee will have the final copy with music come Saturday, which means INGILI will be ready for releasing as well. But we are in a total fix to release INGILI before MBBB. The availability of Olympus Cinema which is undergoing huge renovations even as I speak, the chances are just nil for INGILI. The cinema is scheduled to re-open in mid November. INGILI has a slot only available in late December. However, DRE has a slot already available right after Olympus is re-opened. The studio is hoping to release MBBB in that period, meaning MBBB will be released before INGILI. But Ravee and I don’t mind since both films are from the same unrelated trilogy. We just want any of them released as soon as possible.

To end this post on a happy note, DRE has already verbally agreed to produce the final installment when Ravee and I pitched them our idea. The third and final installment will have two female characters once again at one location. We are still brainstorming. However, one thing I can reveal here is that we have decided on a very cool title which sums up the whole narrative. And I have also come up with a rough outline of the screenplay. Ravee finds it awesome. Hopefully I will start writing the third installment somewhere around January next year. So stay tuned for more updates on all three installments of an unrelated trilogy.

Cheers!

FROM A ROMCOM TO A DRAMEDY

For my next writing gig, I thought I was going to write my first fully fledged romcom feature. But later, once I started brainstorming on the given concept, I realized it wasn’t turning out to be a romcom but actually a dramedy.

At this point I haven’t the slightest clue on how I’m going to mix both genres and come up with a dramatically funny screenplay in a months time. Not writing one would be funnier. Okay, jokes apart, I think I would need two or more months to wrap it. But first I need to go through something like a guide for dummies on how to properly write a dramedy, if there is any available. And looking at my projects in the pipeline, next in line is also a dramedy. What! More dramedy? I think at this very moment I better stick my head into the keyboard of this laptop. At least that would be less painful than the tiled floor underneath my feet or the bricked roads outside. But luckily that expression which is related to a unique habit of ostriches, no kidding, they don’t actually stick their heads in the sand, but they just duck down, usually in high grassy areas. Hallelujah! My grey matter is saved from becoming mashed potato.

So for reasons to pull me out of this dispirited feeling, I’m going to look back at some of my stints at comedy and maybe get inspired for this project in hand.

As I quickly run through memory lane as fast as I could, I have come to a conclusion that I have actually written some bit of comedy mixed with romance in few movies and some television serials. On all these occasions, they were more like loose segments which was a build up to the ensuing drama that follows later on. But good thing is that I have tried comedy. So I consider myself funny. Now I’m trying to laugh by tickling my funny bones.

It all started with HUREEMEY INTHIZAARUGAI (Waiting For You) released in 2005, directed by prolific director, Abdul Fatthaah. This film could be dissected into three or four mixed genres or even more. It starts off with a romcom segment of about fifteen minutes or more. Rest of the film then becomes a tragic/drama and then the latter half becomes a suspense/ thriller respectively. And hilariously enough, after outlining the whole screenplay, I first wrote the third act to ease production scheduling conflicts. But it was a good experience. I guess it’s always a good feeling to break rules, as long as one avoids going behind bars.

Anyway, the audience loved the romcom segment of this mentioned film. They kept laughing at my one-liners and luckily almost everyone understood the jokes thrown here and there, thanks to a solid delivery and on-screen opposite attracts chemistry between Zuhura and Ravee in their debut starring roles. They definitely shone in the first segment.

My next effort at comedy came in a 13 episodes television serial called KURAMEY VADHAA’EE SALAAM (I Say Goodbye). In each episode I used acidic one-liners for the main villains played to evil best but in a cheery tone by Saeed and Hajja. Their bits were hailed and enjoyed by almost all the viewers. This serial was also directed by Fatthaah.

Comedy mixed with romance or viceversa was offered abundantly in the popular 52 episodes television serial, HINITHUNVELAASHEY KALAA (Smile, you). The whole serial was once again directed by Fatthaah. Yes, him again! I must admit that this serial was the turning point that fortified my writing skills in every way. The first 32 episodes were treated lightly with comedy thrown all over. This serial captured a nationwide following. Since I still have a never ending admiration for this serial, and in an effort to save my keyboard, my fingertips and my eyes, I’ll discontinue talking about it any further. I have already written so much about this serial in my previous posts. They are just a matter of few clicks away.

I also added comedy, but very sparsely for VAALOABI ENGEYNAMA (If You Knew How Much I Love You) which went on to win 12 National Awards including best picture and screenplay. On the premier night, my greatest gratification was the audience laughing at almost every one-liner I have used rather than them sobbing at the melodramatic second half.

Short film, ROCKY which was released on DVD was a failed attempt at slapstick comedy. And also I was credited under a pseudonym… whoops! I just spilled a lot of beans here.

After staying away from anything comedy for a while, I returned with my very first full comedy mini-series called AHARENGE LHA DADDY (My Youthful Daddy). Oh boy, the viewers really enjoyed this 5 episodes serial about a wannabe womanizing father who wouldn’t want to grow up. Legendary actor, Jambu Afeef gave a noteworthy performance as the title character. This serial was again helmed by Fatthaah. He sure knows how to direct comedy, I mean, of course, comedy written by who else but me. See this grin Mr. Cheshire cat. Now beat that.

My latest comedy mixed with romance came last year with SAZAA (Punishment). The film was kind of two films rolled into one. The first half was a romcom while the second was a violent drama. The reason I made the first part a no-holds-barred romcom was to subconsciously make the audience also suffer the gritty violence of the second half which befell upon the protagonist. While the audience laughed constantly at the one-liners in the first half, they were in complete silence in the second half. Mission accomplished.

This is where I snap my finger in front of my own face. Snap! With a sudden twitch to my head, clapping my eyelids several times, I finally return from memory lane and jumps into reality. I ask myself, am I inspired now? Now I ask whoever asked me that, are you talkin’ to me? I see right before my eyes written in bold, dramedy! Oh no! I don’t feel funny anymore. I could best write a horror film in this state. Keyboard, here comes my head!

Then there’s static sound…

Cheers!

THE FIRST OFFICIAL TRAILER OF MBBB

The first official trailer of MBBB is out. Check it out.

In short, MBBB is about a determined mother who’d do anything to protect her child especially from her father who’s the only threat whenever he has an episode of short term amnesia which he suffered after a fatal accident.

The film is currently in post-production. Once all the CGI shots needed are inserted, a final cut will be made for music composition. The production team is very upbeat about MBBB and so am I.

Stay tuned for the first official poster too.

IN THE ABSENCE OF POSTING

I must admit that I have no excuses for my long absence. A year and eight months is the longest I have ever stayed without posting. If I hadn’t suffered from trigger fingers, I would have posted every day. And then there was a long silence…

Okay, jokes apart, to begin with I couldn’t continue without mentioning about the most memorable event that took place in my life. My wife and I have, Oh no, you all thought wrong! I couldn’t imagine my life without her, now that we have become proud parents. Yes, I’m a dad! Thank you! Thank you!

On 5th March, 2011, at 12:10 pm, my wife gave birth to a boy at Samitivej Hospital, Bangkok. Seven days later, we named him Taqi, meaning piety.

I still remember as I walked into the operation theatre in a bluish scrub with a nurse, everything went slo-mo. Slowly, all the ambience sound faded. On my right, I saw doctors operating on my wife. The nurse then led me to my little boy who was being cleaned up at further upfront. Thank God I managed to brush off all the pages of WHAT TO EXPECT WHEN YOU’RE EXPECTING. Otherwise I would have Kung-Fu slammed all the doctors on the spot. That was downright inhuman to hang my boy by his feet. Just kidding and I don’t even know Kung-Fu.

Taqi was crying at the top of his lungs, but the sound of his cry was completely muffled, as always happened in slo-mo. To see him for the first time was a moment to behold. Extreme close-up shots of him slowly cut before my eyes. Probably Michael Bay was supervising the editing. Then I turned to my wife when she whispered my name couple of times. She asked me how our boy was. I couldn’t speak. I was speechless completely. All I did was doing a thumb up at her. She smiled.

After doing everything they were doing including cutting the rest of the umbilical cord, the doctors then presented me my boy all wrapped up in a white swaddle. Oh my, he was as light as a feather! I always had difficulty in carrying a newborn since I couldn’t adjust to the zero weight feeling. But with him, everything was instinctive. I looked at him up close. He was the cutest living being I have ever witnessed.

I then took Taqi to my wife. She held him tenderly. More tenderly than I was holding him. Remarkably, he stopped crying. Then it was our turn to cry as we couldn’t hold our tears. But we were crying for joy. This scene would have given a grin to any film director cashing on movies with any number of handkerchiefs.

For the sake of this post not running into hundred or more pages and not giving me trigger fingers for real, I fast forward to eighteen months later, to present day. In a nutshell, every second we’ve been spending with Taqi is both memorable and heavenly. Fade out and end credits roll. With such an ending, I think those directors I just mentioned must be having second thoughts on grinning.

Though I have been stuck in my disappearing act for an awfully long period, best thing about this post is, even after several months without publishing any, it still feels like as if I had published my last post only few days back. Around the time of my last posts, I was heavily involved in the post-production of INGILI (FINGER) I think. And the good news is that I still am. Yes, you all have every reason to frown. INGILI which started production on 17th May 2009 is still under post-production. The film has gone through production hell with shooting going over schedule and now a hellish post-production. However, WATANIYA has become our telecom partner and we have decided on a release date which is either early November or mid December. Yet these dates could change depending on the re-opening date of Olympus after renovation which has been changing a lot as well. This is one of those instances where change is not so very good.

The reason for this extremely long delay in releasing INGILI is manifold. Firstly, the production team was discouraged knowing that the original short story we acquired, on which I based the screenplay was a rip-off of the fourth segment of 1995 released FOUR ROOMS. For a real movie buff who boasts on watching every Quentin Tarantino movie released so far, this was a major embarrassment. A man accepts a bet. He has to strike his lighter ten times or else, well, you’ve guessed it right but I’m not going to give away any spoilers here!

Secondly, the production looked rushed in the final edit. But it’s okay considering that this was an experimental movie. Most probably the mentioned rush was also part of the experiment.

Third reason happened to be the most current one. Composing music is in a fix due to several sub-reasons facing who else but the composer himself. But he’s confirmed that within few days, music will be completed. So for all these reasons and all other reasons that I couldn’t mention here, I’m beginning to feel that this film has already given a finger of its own at its producers, which includes poor me.

Before I continue with the updates of my other notable projects, I think I should mention that I won the best original screenplay for SAZAA (PUNISHMENT) at the ENCHANTEUR MALDIVES FILM AWARDS 2012 which was held in early July. Is that a round of applause I’m hearing or is it just the hard rain falling outside my apartment right now? Anyway, as usual I stayed myself away from the function. Yes, stage fright has consumed me completely, only my right ear is intact now.

MIKOE BAPPA BAEY BAEY (COME MY BABY’S FATHER) the screenplay which I re-outlined and re-wrote as a feature film after acquiring all the rights from a screenplay written as a short film by AHMED RASHEED, owner of LAAMU FONADHOO based studio MANDHEYRA PRODUCTION, was proposed to several high profile producers. Unfortunately, they all declined. They still couldn’t put faith on a film with a concept of two actors at one location. And how could they? If only INGILI was released and made rave reviews and made back its production cost, at least.

However, earlier this year DARK RAIN ENTERTAINMENT (DRE) honcho, MOHAMED ALI aka MOGRE decided to take the risk of producing it. And we came to a great understanding of sharing the spoils as RAVI and I waived our fees for all of our work. This is the second installment to an unrelated trilogy to the concept of two characters at one location which started off with INGILI even though the latter is yet to be released.

As mutually agreed in the development of this trilogy between RAVI and me, once again he stepped on to direct. Shooting was wrapped up in thirteen days. Renowned cinematographer ALI SHIFAU aka CHIPPE lensed from a Canon D60. Yes, if we could release this film as planned on October, this will be the first Dhivehi film to be shot entirely with a DSLR. I haven’t heard any other film in production or post-production being shot with a DSLR. Goody! Goody!

AISHATH RISHMY and MOHAMED MANIK were cast in the lead. The film is in post-production now. Final cut has been made including dubbing and currently CGI work is on-going under the supervision of SHINAAN who is also the CGI supervisor for DRE’s upcoming FATHIHANDHUVARUGE FESHUN 3D. Yes, this film has couple of CGI shots thrown here and there. Hopefully next week, the official first trailer will be released on FILMEE UDHARES. So stay tuned!

Then there’s INDHIRAAS (DECADENCE) which started its production promisingly around June this year. However, not even half way through into principal photography, the production turned out like its title, which loomed into a decadence of its own. The production of this film is currently on hold indefinitely for reasons I’m not aware of. But I do hope that it rises from the ashes like a phoenix since the screenplay of this film is one of the coolest I have written. And then there’s this little heard controversy it also created.

In 1994 Hollywood released a major film which became my most watched movie of all time. I have been watching this film every year since I watched it in 1995. Even this year I have already watched it, like twice! This film has really engraved deep inside my mind tantalizing me in every possible way to outline a local take on it. I feel as if I don’t have any control over my grey matter as it inspiringly outlined a really good screenplay for me to write physically. But until earlier this year, I have resisted the advances my brain has made on me for seventeen long years. Finally I had to succumb because my brain finally demolished my resistance and made me write it.

I began writing, inspired by this film in late 2011. I wrapped up writing in the first quarter of this year. It was named DHILAKANI (FIRE SPARKS). Immediately I started proposing it to interested producers. Unfortunately they kept declining. However, one producer even started pre-production but later disappeared and was never heard of again.

In late July, HUSSAIN MUNAWWAR picked up this screenplay as a follow up to his directorial debut, SAZAA which was the highest grossing film in 2011. Production started in late August. The production team is currently in SHAVIYANI FEEVAKU to shoot the majority of the scenes which was based on an island. All scenes of Male’ except two historical scenes, have been completed.

The cast has ISMAIL RASHEED aka COPEE ISSEY and NIUMA in the lead. MOHAMED MANIK, ROANU HASSAN MANIK, FAISAL, RISHFA and ZIYA complete the list. I still haven’t mentioned which Hollywood film it was inspired from, have I? Well, I just don’t want to be spoiling the storyline of DHILAKANI. But I can assure you, after seeing the materials shot in Male’, it’s going to be really awesome!

What else have I done? Oh yes, before I wrap up this post, I should mention the screenplays I re-wrote for AMJE, the man with fifty or more films directed under his belt. First one was called KEKULHUN (SUFFERING) which was a cautionary tale about drugs. It was originally written by novelist, MOHAMED QASIM. Once the deal was concluded, AMJE called me few days later asking me to re-write it as, drum rolls, a 50 episodes TV serial! I declined, indirectly though.

A month later, he called me again to re-write another screenplay which was again written by QASIM. It was called VAHUM (SUSPICION). I brought several changes to the characters, the plot and gave it a super cool ending. It’s been a while since I completed it. But I’m yet to hear from him. But I’m not going be like the title suggests, suspicious about anything. He’d call, you know?

I leave for now. Hopefully I’m going to be a tad frequent in future.

Cheers!

DOES TITLE MATTER?

Imagine this. You are taking your four year old daughter to a public gathering. There your favorite political candidate is campaigning. He’s going to give a memorable speech on how he envisions the future for you and everyone else. Like you, several others are amassing with high hopes and they are taking their cuddly children too. There’s a feeling of promise and excitement in the air.

Your candidate walks up to the podium. He starts giving an arousing speech. As he lists down his pledges, the applause he receives is almost deafening. Unaware of a word he’s saying, the children are cheering as well. Suddenly out of nowhere, someone mysterious leaps towards him. Before you know it, there is a huge explosion. You only see a flash of light before everything goes completely dark.

A minute later, you start hearing hummed voices of people screaming. You are lying face down. Your head feels heavy. Your whole body is trembling. You are covered in pieces of human flesh and blood. The heavy smoke clouds your vision. You lift your head with all your might. You see people screaming in pain but their voices you hear are still drawn out. Arms of children and adults torn out and their legs ripped off from their bodies. It’s a bloodbath and it’s real messy. But when you come to your senses, you realize that you are still holding on to your daughter. You look at her immediately. All you have is her arm. How would you feel?

A day has passed. You are mourning. As you sit in a corner of your room, you see flashbacks of your daughter playing around. Her laughter echoes and then subsides. On news you hear that the people responsible of the massacre are justifying that they did it for a noble cause. They wanted to destroy your candidate in the name of freedom or whatever. And they are very deeply sorry for the collateral damage. Would you approve their justification? How would you feel?

Here’s a similar story which is true. And yes, it has an explosion too. I have already written a prologue of this story in my last post. However here’s a quick recap. I started writing a screenplay called INDHIRAAS for DV PRODUCTION on May 2010. I submitted them a draft on 9th June 2010. The studio acquired the rights of the screenplay on 6th January 2011.

On the night of 8th January 2011, MUA who is the chief editor of DV PRODUCTION and for whom the screenplay was tailor-made called me to inform that the title of INDHIRAAS has been taken by a producer and a director, their names I decline to mention. I don’t know much about the producer but the director, he was a good friend both personally and professionally. I was confident that he wouldn’t be so irrational or unprofessional. He was the kind of person who would come forward and stop anyone else from doing such an unethical thing. That’s why I told MUA it couldn’t be true. Besides, I had another very good reason.

Sadly, the very next day I was in total shock when I was confirmed officially that the title was actually taken by them. DV PRODUCTION is slightly responsible for taking everything for granted by not registering the title at first. It was a rude awakening for me. Not in my wildest dream have I thought that our local film industry is plagued by such cutthroats.

One might wonder, what’s this big deal about a title? It’s only a title. True, a title is a title. But the title is everything to a screenplay and thereafter for a film.

A title gives out a lot of information. A title amazingly summarizes the whole film. It gives a clue about what the film is about, neatly encapsulating the underlying idea or moral of the story. It simply captures the dramatic or thematic essence of the story.

A title takes the audience anywhere geographically, visually, emotionally or wherever you want to take them. It puts the audience in the proper frame of mind to sink in to the film easily. It inspires and sparks the imagination of actors, directors and the entire production team. Moreover, a title grabs the imagination of the audience.

From a marketing angle, a title makes it easier to fire up the promotion of the film. It’s the title which simply causes people to say the name of the film spontaneously. The title is what gives an identity to a film.

A title also creates a certain buzz. You don’t get too many chances at making a good first impression, do you? That’s what a title is all about. From everything, what disappointed me most was the fact that the director in question also happened to be a very promising screenwriter. How did he miss the importance of a title?

To choose INDHIRAAS as the title for my screenplay, I did a lot of brainstorming. I think I have spent a day or two brooding over internet researching for the right name. Once I chose INDHIRAAS, it stirred my creativity. I structured my screenplay around it. But unfortunately all my effort has gone up in smoke because of a senseless act. They wanted to infuriate MUA because they thought it was him who criticizes them in the media anonymously. But MUA is infamous for his straightforwardness. Besides, an individual is innocent until proven guilty.

Here’s the funny part. In a conversation this director had with MUA today, he also accused me as the one hiding under a pseudonym attacking them in the facebook. I thought he realized of his own undoing and made an attempt to play down the guilt of his amateurish accomplishment by accusing me. Why would I want to express my thoughts somewhere else when I have been blogging here while they were still in diapers and suckling pacifiers?

Anyway, after all is said and done, does it sound any ironic that INDHIRAAS actually means decadence?

On a very pathetic note, I still say cheers!

INDHIRAAS, NOW A PROPERTY OF DV PRODUCTION

Now it is official. Yesterday evening at SAFFRON at around 1445 hours, the screenplay of INDHIRAAS (DECADENCE) has become a property of DV PRODUCTION. The studio has completed acquiring all the rights of it as verbally agreed between the studio and myself almost seven months ago.

I think it was during last week of April last year that I met with DV PRODUCTION head, MUHAMMA and chief editor of the studio, MUAA who is also one of the most promising young actors over a coffee at now demolished SALSA CAFE. It was a late evening. MUHAMMA wanted to discuss a concept he had and wanted to commission me to write it as a starring vehicle for MUAA.

Once MUHAMMA explained the main concept, I felt a certain darkness looming all around it. This was yes, quite tantalizing! We first did a quick brainstorming. We discussed mostly on how plausible his concept was. And from the ideas we had, we slightly fine tuned his concept here and there. But before we finished the meeting, I came up with another idea which MUHAMMA and MUAA applauded. Their expressive smiles were enough. I asked MUAA if he was willing to go the distance. If only he decided to fully commit, my idea would work for certain giving the screenplay an incredible edge. Consider it to be the element of surprise. Without any hesitation, he accepted it.

Later that night, I couldn’t wait but started working on structuring the screenplay. However, first I had to do some researching. Lot of researching I mean. After couple of hours of googling, I managed to get all the information I needed to enmesh them in to my structure. After that I called it a night.

Next day, I resumed work. I began constructing the basic structure. After three hours, a short break, another two hours, several scene cards, arrangements, rearrangements and adjustments later, the structure of INDHIRAAS was shaped out. But I took a risk. Because of the dark elements in the concept, I deliberately made my protagonist darker. Thus the screenplay demanded all my favorite themes to be included. I wanted to start writing immediately. But that’s when I came to a complete halt.

My protagonist was a definite antihero and I never had the slightest clue about his background in reality. I listed out everything I required to develop him and called MUAA. We hooked up for a coffee. He asked me what I wanted to know. I showed my list, which was looking more like a huge questionnaire. To my surprise, he began answering them one by one. He was talking about a different side of life I never thought existed. He was like an old hand. He was  actually living this protagonist.

Once MUA was done, I got everything I needed to work on his character. I must say I got more than I required. I went back to work. And based on his information, I did few tweaks to the whole structure of the screenplay. It now looked better. Much better!

It took me two days to complete developing all the characters. But it was on the protagonist I had to spend more time. He really gave me the creeps. Not that he was contesting against Freddy or Jason. This was turning out as my first screenplay which has a dark, flawed and a conflicted protagonist who is also an antihero and stays such from start to finish. His character arc, though heavily curved, was curving in negativity. It was this challenge that kept my creative cells active at all times. And since it would be difficult to empathize with such a protagonist, my task to make the audience like him became much harder. But I knew with several tricks up in my sleeve, which I don’t want to mention here for the confidentiality of the storyline and MUAA’s full commitment to his character, it was possible to pull this off.

I think it was while I was still structuring, I thought of BAARU SHAREE directing it. His name kept nagging me. We worked on a project with a similar theme before but with less darker tones. I had no second thoughts that whoever can flesh out INDHIRAAS would be him. I called MUAA to contact SHAREE officially. An hour later MUAA called back and informed me that SHAREE was very interested. It really made my day and charged me up more than ever.

Structuring of INDHIRAAS was my most mind boggling experience so far. Writing went smoothly and I must say very passionately. To write INDHIRAAS, I have woken up at early morning many times than I did for any other screenplay so far. I completed the first draft on 9 June 2010, two days before World Cup 2010 in South Africa. The very next day, I handed MUAA a print.

World Cup 2010 gave me a month long break not to think too much about INDHIRAAS. However, MUAA did call me to congratulate. He was completely thrilled.

After World Cup was over, I discussed the major turning points of INDHIRAAS with my loving wife who always mysteriously points out important elements that I have missed at writing. To this day, I still don’t understand how she does it. She read several key scenes and gave me as much feedback. I remember in one key scene between the protagonist and his love interest, my wife asked me to change a word in the dialogue she was suggesting. I did and voilà! It made the scene more effective and meaningful. Also on her suggestion, I even re-arranged the characters in a scene which was an important turning point. And when amended, the scene was dramatically more effective and more emotional even.

After the amendments, I kept the screenplay for awhile since DV PRODUCTION was busy with the post production and releasing of their now record breaking megahit, NIUMA. I knew it would be pointless to submit INDHIRAAS at such a time.

Then in early November last year, MUAA asked me to finalize the screenplay. I went through it one last time, did few more revisions and wrapped it up on November 26th. But then the studio postponed acquiring the screenplay officially when NIUMA was leaked online. They were devastated.

But now that things have settled down, their focus now is on producing INDHIRAAS. They want to make it their number one priority of 2011. This is when this post loops back to the main event of yesterday at SAFFRON. I am very much excited about the project and wish the studio, MUAA and the production team all the best. It was a pleasure doing business with you, DV PRODUCTION.

Cheers!

ADIEU, SALEEMBE

THAUBA (ABSOLUTION) which I wrote and directed for INTER-OFFICE TELEDRAMA COMPETITION in 1999 for then Atolls ministry was aired on MNBC-ONE’s REWIND yesterday morning. Sadly, it was cut so heavily that the flow of the story was hurt real badly. Made me wonder why those cuts were shown when it was first aired back in 1999 and not now? I have no idea what the censor guidelines of that station are in this century. One thing obvious is that it has become very strict.

One cut I really didn’t understand was a complete scene of 30 seconds where two people pay respect at a tomb of a recently deceased. I mean how many times has the same channel shown tombs? Isn’t it traditional for people to visit their concerned tombs and pay respect? What’s going on?

Despite all this,  it was completely a different experience watching this drama yesterday. This time it hit my heartstrings real deep. But I  didn’t even write this drama with the intention of attacking there. Yet, I was in tears. I was in tears to see our late MOHAMED SALEEM UMBE or SALEEMBE as we used to address him. It was both a delight and a grief to see him again.

SALEEMBE was really the heart and soul of all five dramas we produced under Atolls ministry for the above said competition from 1999 to 2003 respectively. He may have left us, but his memories remain as strong as the array of characters he portrayed.

It was while shooting THAUBA that he really made an impact. And in dramas which followed thereafter, he left me with no choice but write a key role for him. Though these roles were tailor-made for him, it was his sheer natural acting abilities that gave life to his characters and made them so memorable.

THAUBA was set in a remote island and follows AINTHU, a free-thinking girl who is also the darling of her parents especially her father’s. But when she meets a passing traveler, gets involved with him romantically and loses her self-control, everything spirals downhill for her forever changing her life and those around her. The drama is more about her difficult journey to absolution and her coming to terms with her disgraced father.

We shot THAUBA in AA. THODDOO. Since our staff was less enthusiastic at participating in the drama competition at that time, I was forced to write very limited characters in THAUBA. And when it came for casting, I remember I couldn’t even manage to get anyone to portray mother of AINTHU. And I had to use the same actor who played her sister as her mother too, but with a little old make-up.

The second principal role in THAUBA was AINTHU’s father and was much layered. I first cast a staff named SAEEDBE for this role because of his sympathetic look. Meanwhile, SALEEMBE was given a small role with few scenes as the main rival of SAEEDBE.

I first caught the attention of SALEEMBE when I was still in school. Back then TVM, now MNBC-ONE showed a serial based on real police case files, with each episode a case. And real police performed in every episode. At that time SALEEMBE was working in police and he was featured in one of the episodes. He left me in complete awe playing a loud mouthed baddie. He was both real and frightening. He was the first screen character to give me goose bumps. HANNIBAL LECTER comes several years later.

It turned as both a challenge and an honor to direct SALEEMBE for the first time. When production of THAUBA began, I scheduled his roles last since I was confidant of him. At that time HAJJA who played the role AINTHU was already working in commercial video songs. So I had no problem with her scenes as she was in almost every scene.

I first began shooting scenes of SAEEDBE since it was his first exposure in front of the camera. The first two scenes of SAEEDBE were easy. However, the third scene we shot, as I see it was much easier in comparison.

It was an indoor shoot and almost everyone including SALEEMBE was there that night. I remember SALEEMBE sitting quietly on the floor going through the screenplay. Meanwhile, I was having a hard time with the first shot of SAEEDBE. The scene was simple enough. HAJJA sneaks in to her room after bidding farewell to her secret boyfriend. Just as she opens the door of her room, SAEEDBE calls her from his room. It was the shot where SAEEDBE  has to open the door of his room, stops and while wiping  his face with his towel has to deliver his line to HAJJA. This simple shot was running in to several takes. SAEEDBE was not getting it right. I felt something was missing. Was it the way he wiped his face while delivering his lines or was it the rigidness in his posture? But something was  incredibly not right. I think it was when I was dissatisfied with the twenty fourth take, I impulsively asked SALEEMBE if he could show SAEEDBE how to do it right.

SALEEMBE in his cracked tone said that it was not a problem. He immediately got up from the floor, kept his screenplay on the nearest chair and pulled off his shirt as he walked towards the mark where SAEEDBE was standing. SAEEDBE made way for SALEEMBE and passed him the towel. SALEEMBE didn’t even ask what his lines were and delivered it with such finesse that awed me the same way as he did when I watched his police file episode. I was not aware when I immediately suggested SALEEMBE to play the role. It was automatic. And fortunately, SAEEDBE also agreed that SALEEMBE should play the part since the role demanded more acting.

In the days that followed, we completed the shooting which much gusto. SALEEMBE was born to play the role of HAJJA’s father. And in the next three dramas we produced, SALEEMBE and HAJJA became one convincing team of father and daughter.

As I look back at five wonderful years of working with SALEEMBE, he always bring me a smile and a tear of joy. It’s always sad to say goodbye to someone who, like he made a deep impact with his roles he played, made an impact for everyone in real life. He definitely made an impact in my life. He was the reason behind my enthusiasm to direct all those dramas that I directed for Atolls. It was a joy to direct him in his powerful roles. Adieu, SALEEMBE. May he rest in peace.

Cheers!