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TWO YEARS TO FADE OUT

Two years ago, I began writing a screenplay.

For now, let us simply call it Untitled.

I had the central idea. I knew what I wanted the screenplay to say, and I thought I knew the road it would take to get there.

Then my producer called.

He had recently watched a local film and felt that parts of my story had some similarities to it.

That call took the wind out of me.

I told him I needed time. I would return to the outline, take the story apart and rebuild it—while preserving the heart of what I had originally set out to write.

That sounded very professional.

What followed was anything but.

There were days when I sat in front of my laptop and stared at the screen, unable to write a single word. A week might pass before I managed one line. Sometimes two. On particularly productive days, I may even have moved a comma.

And that was how it continued for more than a year.

I outlined. I abandoned the outline. I tried another direction. I questioned it. I returned to the beginning. Some ideas survived every version. Others disappeared after weeks of work because they belonged to a different screenplay—not this one.

There was procrastination too. I would love to blame the laptop, the weather or some mysterious failure of artistic alignment. But the laptop was innocent.

At other times, I tried to squeeze every last drop from whatever creative juice remained in me. Unfortunately, creativity is not toothpaste. The harder you squeeze, the less cooperative it becomes.

Through all this, my producer never pressured me.

He assured me that I did not need to rush. He was not waiting for something quick. He was waiting for something good.

That patience gave the screenplay room to breathe. More importantly, it gave me room to fail, reconsider and begin again.

Then, at the beginning of this year, something changed.

The story began to flow.

Not all at once. Not like some divine waterfall pouring perfectly formatted scenes onto the page. But the characters started moving again. Images began connecting. Moments that had remained separate for months suddenly found their place beside one another.

I kept outlining and re-outlining.

I moved scenes. Removed them. Brought some back. I stripped away dialogue whenever an image could carry the emotion. I searched for silence where words felt too easy. I planted small visual details early so they could return later with greater meaning.

Gradually, the screenplay found its rhythm.

It became a story told as much through faces, spaces, objects and quiet gestures as through dialogue. It demanded patience from me. It also demanded precision. Every scene had to earn its place. Every spoken line had to justify breaking the silence.

Perhaps that is why this screenplay took so long.

Some stories allow themselves to be written.

Others make the writer prove that he deserves them.

This one made me work for every page.

Now, after countless outlines, discarded scenes, rewritten moments and long stretches of doubt, I have finally reached the end.

And strangely, looking back, I do not resent the difficult days. The screenplay needed those false starts. It needed the silence. It may even have needed those weeks when all I could write was a single line.

Because the screenplay I have completed is not the one I began two years ago.

I believe it is better.

It is one of the most visually driven screenplays I have written and, without revealing anything about its story, also one of the most emotionally demanding. More importantly, it has become one of the most satisfying screenplays I have written so far.

A huge thank-you to my producer for giving me something increasingly rare in this business:

Time.

Time to rethink.

Time to doubt.

Time to discover.

Time to write the screenplay this story deserved.

Two years ago, I thought I knew exactly where it was going.

I was wrong.

Thankfully.

A STORY THAT WOULDN’T LEAVE ALONE

Some scripts you wrestle into shape. Others… they quietly unravel you while you’re trying to write them.

This one was different from the very beginning.

It arrived as a spec script from a brilliant writer/director, with a strong central idea — but instead of tracing the original lines, I found myself slowly dismantling it, piece by piece, and rebuilding it into something far more internal. Far more unsettling. And far more… me.

The journey wasn’t straightforward. In fact, I don’t think I’ve ever rewritten the third act of a screenplay so many times in my life — not because it didn’t work, but because I kept uncovering deeper truths the characters were hiding. Especially the protagonist. He wasn’t just grieving. He was living in the ghost of what he lost.

What began as a psychological drama soon evolved into something deeper — a layered family story about what holds people together even when they drift apart. At its heart, this became a film about how much a family needs each other to stay afloat — even when one of them has emotionally disappeared.

This is a story about presence, absence, memory, and guilt — but not in the ways we usually tell them. Every character carries a wound. Some show it. Some bury it. Some don’t even know it’s there until it explodes into the room. The screenplay flirts with silence, leans into hallucination, and plays with emotional withholding in ways that made me both uncomfortable and strangely fulfilled.

At its core, it’s an exploration of how grief, when unprocessed, can become a kind of architecture — building rooms we live in, long after we should have left. I was fascinated by the idea of a man who hasn’t just lost his mother… but one who hasn’t let her go. That subtle difference shaped everything.

And let’s not forget the child in the story — quietly drawing her emotions in her art book. That subplot, in particular, shook me. Sometimes children say more in silence than adults ever do in monologues.

Now that it’s wrapped — and I mean really wrapped — I feel both emptied and enriched. Like I’ve said goodbye to someone I never really met… but somehow knew intimately.

This script didn’t come easy. But it came honestly. And I think that’s what makes this one special.

The title is still under wraps for now — but the screenplay is ready. And when it finds its audience, I hope it sits with them quietly… the same way it sat with me.

I can’t wait for you to meet it.

More soon.